Argument essay w/ works cited

Micah Nelson

English 101-5:30

Dr. Sonia Begert

3 December 2015

Cut Back A Little

Today as citizens of America, and stewards of the land we face many dilemmas. Health problems caused by air pollution, damage to precious land from coal mining, environmental deterioration due to global warming, water pollution, and even acid rain. All of these major complications could be avoided if we simply cut back on the amount of energy we use in our daily lives. In this essay I will discuss how and why we should cut back on our use of energy and how in doing so we won't only be improving our lives, but the lives of generations to come.

Cutting back on energy means many things. On the Natural Resources Defense Council website it states that “Our best weapon against global climate change is clean energy. Renewable power, conservation, energy efficiency in buildings and elsewhere, more efficient vehicles and clean fuels. These are the solutions that will reduce the impacts on our climate, revive our economy, and create jobs”(Quotation from NDRC website). By saving energy we are saving the earth, saving lives, and saving money.

Our earth is being greatly impacted by many factors. One of the biggest issues we face is climate change due to global warming. Climate change is caused by global warming. A large factor adding to global warming is our burning of fossil fuels. We burn fossil fuels for many different purposes but one of the most important outcomes we get is electricity. However in the U.S. our main way of creating electricity is burning fossil fuels in a coal, oil, or gas powered power station, turning water into steam, and then using the steam to power a big set of wheels called a steam turbine. “In 2014, the United States generated about 4,093 billion kilowatt hours of electricity.  About 67% of the electricity generated was from fossil fuels (coal, natural gas, and petroleum)”(Quote from U.S. Energy Information Administration website) CO2  and greenhouse gasses are released, making our atmosphere thicker, and in turn is heating the earth. Thus causing climate change. “Climate change is the greatest humanitarian crisis of our time, responsible for rising seas, raging storms, searing heat, ferocious fires, severe drought, and punishing floods. It threatens our health, communities, economy, and national security”(Quotation from NRDC website). While maybe having a hotter summer here in Washington where the sun only comes out every so often, is adding to our global climate change worth it?  All agricultural development and growth depends on a steady water supply, and with climate change we have seen more floods and droughts. Take California for example. Over the summer I spent some time in San Diego at my Grandmother's house. At this time California had been experiencing an extreme drought. My Grandma explained to me how nobody was even allowed to water their gardens, or fill their pools, and that residents of the area had been advised to cut back on their overall water usage. This was especially sad to see because my grandmas whole garden had died due to this drought. She had used this garden to grow many foods such as tomatoes, and carrots which were beneficial to her overall health, and also saved her overall expenses instead of going to the grocery store. On a larger scale we see in an article by Katharine Mieszkowski on July 23, 2014 that, “California farms, which guzzle 80 percent of the water used by humans in the state, are feeling the heat. Farmers in the dry Central Valley alone may stand to lose $810 million this year from keeping their fields idle, according to the UC Davis Center for Watershed Sciences. They’ll also spend an extra $453 million on pumping water out of the ground. The state likely will lose 17,100 agricultural jobs because of the drought”(Article on Reveal News Website). We clearly see how just cutting down and using renewable green sources of energy can save us from larger problems like the drought in California, which is only one of the many places being affected negatively by climate change.

In cutting back on our use of energy we can save lives, and make a healthier living environment for future generations. When we burn fossil fuels we release all sorts of chemicals, depending on what fossil fuel we are burning. The chemicals released range from things like lead which is released into the atmosphere when we buy unleaded gasoline, to things like sulfur dioxide that comes from the burning of coal and oil in power plants. Sulfur dioxide worsens symptoms of people who have asthma or emphysema. Sulfur also irritates people's eyes, noses, throats, and even has a negative effect on crops. If we simply cut back on our use of energy we could reduce some of the damage we are doing to the earth and ourselves. In the chapter 5 of the book “Power Hungry” by Robert Bryce,  fellow at the Institute for Energy Research, it talks about how coal fired power plants are some of the largest emitters of mercury “pumping some 96,000 pounds of mercury into the air each year.” He then goes on to explain how most humans come into contact with mercury when eating fish from bodies of water that have been exposed to the mercury, and how damaging it is to the human body. Mercury especially affects pregnant woman, and older folks, and has been linked to things like “autism, impaired cognition, and neurodegenerative disorders like alzheimer's.” Bryce also goes on to explain how on top of all of the mercury released by coal burning power plants, they also release about “176,000 pounds of lead, 161,000 pounds of chromium, and 100,000 pounds of arsenic- all of which are damaging to the human body”(section from chapter 5 of the book Power Hungry). As you can see the amount of coal, and other fossil fuels needed to sustain our energy wasting lifestyles has major health risks.

By cutting back on our use of energy, we are also reducing our bills, and who doesn't enjoy saving money? We as Americans waste so much electricity, through habits, and through things like leaving the lights on while we're away. Our hard earned money is being wasted, when we could set money aside to do things like a family vacation ,save money for  college, or even save up for that new car you've been wanting! The cost of energy used in our household varies from state to state, but according to latest release from the U.S. Department of Energy-Energy Information Administration (EIA), “the average residential monthly electric bill was $110.2”(section from eye on housing website). This is a lot of money to some who don't have much, and even to those who have the money, it's never a bad time to save.

Recently in my global citizenship class at Bainbridge Island High School we watched a video on energy, and the measures homes, schools, and even cities are taking to cut back on the cost of electricity. We first see an average couple, in an average house, in your average neighborhood. They wanted to cut back on their electricity cost, so they took the measures to do so. First they replaced their refrigerator, washer, and dryer with Energy Star approved appliances. Energy star is an U.S. environmental protection agency organization that works to help people, and businesses cut back on their costs of energy through energy efficiency. Even though the couple is buying these appliances now it's going to save them money in the long run. They then find leaks in their air ducts and seal them up to stop cold air from getting in and hot air from getting out. This makes it so they don't have to keep heat up their house as often or for as long when it's cold, and vice versa. The next electricity bill was substantially reduced, enough so that their house got a badge nailed on it informing people that their house is Energy Star approved. We then saw how schools in places like North carolina were cutting back on electricity costs by building schools that utilize daylighting, instead of lighting through electric light bulbs. Finally we saw how the city of Austin Texas replaced all of their traffic lights with LED lights, saving the city more than 200,000 dollars in energy cost. In fact Austin wasn't the only place who saved themselves hundreds of thousand of dollars by cutting back on electricity through this simple method, “By replacing outmoded light bulbs in street traffic lights with highly-efficient LED (light emitting diode) bulbs, U.S. cities report over 10.4 million in saving every year”(section from government energy efficient solutions website). This is substantial. One, because these cities now have more money to put towards things that benefit the community, and two because in cutting back on their use of electricity the less fossil fuels need burned in power plants to create it. These are just some of the many ways people, and places have cut back on their use of energy in order to save themselves money.

Cutting back on energy usage has many clear health, environmental, and social benefits. We may not see something as simple unplugging the tv to make a difference, and it won't. Not unless we all work together, and take baby steps towards creating a healthy living environment, not only for us but for generations to come. By cutting back on our use of energy we are doing much more than just saving ourselves some money, we are saving lives, saving the world.

 

Works Cited

"Average Monthly Electrical Bill by State – Updated Data." Eye On Housing. National Association of Home Builders, 12 Mar. 2015. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.

Bryce, Robert. "Chapter 5." Power Hungry: The Myths of "green" Energy and the Real Fuels of the Future. New York, NY: PublicAffairs, 2010. 58-59. Print.

"Electricity and Climate Change." Electricity and Climate Change. Power Scorecard, 2000. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.

"Energy." Efficiency, Alternative and Renewable Sources. Natural Resources Defense Council, 13 Nov. 2. Web. 1 Dec. 2015.

Letcher, Trevor M. Future Energy: Improved, Sustainable and Clean Options for Our Planet. London: Elsevier, 2008. Print.

"U.S. Energy Information Administration - EIA - Independent Statistics and Analysis." What Is U.S. Electricity Generation by Energy Source? U.S. Department of Energy, 31 Mar. 2015. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.

Summary of save water ad

Summary: Water waste leads to a lack of clean drinking water. 

Paraphrase: Save water, save the world. Gallons of water are wasted every year, causing shortages in clean water. These shortages lead to several deaths every year. Places like California have gone through droughts that call for a need to safe water for cleaning drinking.

Thinking beyond words missing homework

The addition of music, voice overs, an written words made Obama's "yes we can" speech so much more powerful. Unlike just listening to Obama give an already compelling speech, music, voice overs, and written words just made the speech really stick in your head. The music put a tune in my head making me sing to myself "yes we can." The voice overs made it memorable because i saw so many artists that I like. And written words also added to the visual aspect of it thus making it even more memorable.

Argument paper Final

Micah Nelson

English 101-5:30

Dr. Sonia Begert

3 December 2015

Cut Back A Little To Save A Lot

Today as citizens of America, and stewards of the earth we face many dilemmas: Health problems caused by air pollution, damage to precious land from coal mining, environmental deterioration due to global warming, water pollution, and even acid rain. All of these major complications could be avoided if we simply cut back on the amount of energy we use in our daily lives. In this essay I will discuss how and why we should cut back on our use of energy and the many ways in which  we can benefit from it.

Cutting back on energy means many things. On the Natural Resources Defense Council website it states that “Our best weapon against global climate change is clean energy. Renewable power, conservation, energy efficiency in buildings and elsewhere, more efficient vehicles and clean fuels. These are the solutions that will reduce the impacts on our climate, revive our economy, and create jobs”(Quotation from NDRC website). By saving energy we are saving the earth, saving lives, and saving money.

Our earth is being greatly impacted by many factors. One of the biggest issues we face is climate change due to global warming, caused by the burning of fossil fuels. We burn fossil fuels for many different purposes but one of the most important outcomes we get from this process is electricity. In the U.S. our main process of creating electricity is by burning fossil fuels in a coal, oil, or gas powered power station. These power plants turn water into steam, and then using the steam to power a big set of wheels called a steam turbine. “In 2014, the United States generated about 4,093 billion kilowatt hours of electricity.  About 67% of the electricity generated was from fossil fuels (coal, natural gas, and petroleum)”(Quote from U.S. Energy Information Administration website) CO2  and greenhouse gasses are released, making our atmosphere thicker, and in turn is heating the earth. Thus causing climate change. “Climate change is the greatest humanitarian crisis of our time, responsible for rising seas, raging storms, searing heat, ferocious fires, severe drought, and punishing floods. It threatens our health, communities, economy, and national security”(Quotation from NRDC website). While maybe having a hotter summer here in Washington would be enjoyable, adding to our the severity of our already changing climate is not worth it by any means.  Agricultural development and growth depends on a steady water supply, but due to climate change we have seen more floods and droughts. Take California for example. Over the summer I spent some time in San Diego at my Grandmother's house. At this time California had been experiencing an extreme drought. My Grandma explained to me how nobody was even allowed to water their gardens, or fill their pools, and that residents of the area had been advised to cut back on their overall water usage. This was especially sad to see because my grandmas whole garden had died due to this drought. She had used this garden to grow many foods such as tomatoes, and carrots which were beneficial to her overall health, and also saved her money on her grocery bill.. On a larger scale we see climate change explained by Katharine Mieszkowski, on July 23, 2014 that, “California farms, which guzzle 80 percent of the water used by humans in the state, are feeling the heat. Farmers in the dry Central Valley alone may stand to lose $810 million this year from keeping their fields idle, according to the UC Davis Center for Watershed Sciences. They’ll also spend an extra $453 million on pumping water out of the ground. The state likely will lose 17,100 agricultural jobs because of the drought”(Article on Reveal News Website). We can clearly see how just by cutting down on our energy usage would slow down, reduce, and save us from big problems like the drought in California, which is only one of the many places being affected negatively by climate change.

In cutting back on our use of energy we can save lives, and make a healthier living environment for future generations. When we burn fossil fuels we release all sorts of chemicals, depending on what fossil fuel we are burning. The chemicals released range from things like lead which is released into the atmosphere when we buy unleaded gasoline, to things like sulfur dioxide that comes from the burning of coal and oil in power plants. Sulfur dioxide worsens symptoms of people who have asthma or emphysema. Sulfur also irritates people's eyes, noses, throats, and even has a negative effect on crops. If we simply cut back on our use of energy we could reduce some of the damage we are doing to the earth and ourselves. In the chapter 5 of the book “Power Hungry” by Robert Bryce,  fellow at the Institute for Energy Research, it talks about how coal fired power plants are some of the largest emitters of mercury “pumping some 96,000 pounds of mercury into the air each year.” He then goes on to explain how most humans come into contact with mercury when eating fish from bodies of water that have been exposed to the mercury, and how damaging it is to the human body. Mercury especially affects pregnant woman, and older folks, and has been linked to things like “autism, impaired cognition, and neurodegenerative disorders like Alzheimer's.” Bryce also goes on to explain how on top of all of the mercury released by coal burning power plants, they also release about “176,000 pounds of lead, 161,000 pounds of chromium, and 100,000 pounds of arsenic- all of which are damaging to the human body”(section from chapter 5 of the book Power Hungry). As you can see the amount of coal, and other fossil fuels needed to sustain our energy wasting lifestyles has major health risks.

By cutting back on our use of energy, we are also reducing our bills, and who doesn't enjoy saving money? We as Americans waste so much electricity, through habits, and through things like leaving the lights on while we're away. Our hard earned money is being wasted, when we could set money aside to do things like a family vacation ,save money for  college, or even save up for that new car you've been wanting! The cost of energy used in our household varies from state to state, but according to latest release from the U.S. Department of Energy-Energy Information Administration (EIA), “the average residential monthly electric bill was $110.2”(section from eye on housing website). This is a lot of money to some who don't have much, and even to those who have the money, it's never a bad time to save.

Recently in my global citizenship class at Bainbridge Island High School we watched a video on energy, and the measures homes, schools, and even cities are taking to cut back on the cost of electricity. We first see an average couple, in an average house, in your average neighborhood. They wanted to cut back on their electricity cost, so they took the measures to do so. First they replaced their refrigerator, washer, and dryer with Energy Star approved appliances. Energy star is an U.S. environmental protection agency organization that works to help people, and businesses cut back on their costs of energy through energy efficiency. Even though the couple is buying these appliances now it's going to save them money in the long run. They then find leaks in their air ducts and seal them up to stop cold air from getting in and hot air from getting out. This makes it so they don't have to keep heat up their house as often or for as long when it's cold, and vice versa. The next electricity bill was substantially reduced, enough so that their house got a badge nailed on it informing people that their house is Energy Star approved. We then saw how schools in places like North Carolina were cutting back on electricity costs by building schools that utilize day lighting, instead of lighting through electric light bulbs. Finally we saw how the city of Austin Texas replaced all of their traffic lights with LED lights, saving the city more than 200,000 dollars in energy cost. In fact Austin wasn't the only place who saved themselves hundreds of thousand of dollars by cutting back on electricity through this simple method, “By replacing outmoded light bulbs in street traffic lights with highly-efficient LED (light emitting diode) bulbs, U.S. cities report over 10.4 million in saving every year”(section from government energy efficient solutions website). This is significant. One, because these cities now have more money to put towards things that benefit the community, and two because in cutting back on their use of electricity the less fossil fuels need burned in power plants to create it. These are just some of the many ways people, and places have cut back on their use of energy in order to save themselves money.

Cutting back on energy usage has many clear health, environmental, and social benefits. We may not see something as simple unplugging the TV to make a difference, and it won't. Not unless we all work together, and take baby steps towards creating a healthy living environment, not only for us but for generations to come. By cutting back on our use of energy we are doing much more than just saving ourselves some money, we are saving lives, saving the world.

 

Works Cited

"Average Monthly Electrical Bill by State – Updated Data." Eye On Housing. National Association of Home Builders, 12 Mar. 2015. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.

Bryce, Robert. "Chapter 5." Power Hungry: The Myths of "green" Energy and the Real Fuels of the Future. New York, NY: Public Affairs, 2010. 58-59. Print.

"Electricity and Climate Change." Electricity and Climate Change. Power Scorecard, 2000. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.

"Energy." Efficiency, Alternative and Renewable Sources. Natural Resources Defense Council, 13 Nov. 2. Web. 1 Dec. 2015.

Letcher, Trevor M. Future Energy: Improved, Sustainable and Clean Options for Our Planet. London: Elsevier, 2008. Print.

"U.S. Energy Information Administration - EIA - Independent Statistics and Analysis." What Is U.S. Electricity Generation by Energy Source? U.S. Department of Energy, 31 Mar. 2015. Web.

01 Dec. 2015.

In class lab: Analyzing an Argument

Sarah's Paper:

1. The writer is trying to make the point that designer babies are a good thing for society. The thesis is that "Designer babies are a good thing for our society."
2. The writer then goes on to explain how designer babies are good because they can prevent children from having birth defects, and cause a smarter generation. She backs the first claim with a quote, and pathos. She backs up the second with another quote by an author. One thing that could have supported the writers claims is credibility to her sources, instead of just giving random quotes.
3. The writer mentions that we take vitamins during pregnancy to prevent our child from having birth defects, so why not ensure that our child does not get any birth defects through the designer baby process. She responded to the counter arguments very appropriately and respectfully. She avoids generalization because she makes the point that we all don't want our baby to have birth defects.
4. The writer also gives outside information when she explains how doctors are replacing children's mitochondria with healthy new ones. She makes sure that this claim is credible by explaining how the person who made the claim (Mark Sauer) is a member of a scientific team working at Columbia university. The writer did not note how current this claim was, which makes a difference in the credibility of it, because if this was an interview from long ago it would be clear that this technology went no where.
5. The writer starts out by appealing to peoples emotional side by asking people to imagine if they had the chance to have traits they don't have, and maybe want. She doesn't assume that the reader knows much about the topic because she explains the process, what it could do, and how people would benefit from it. "it is possible to have a healthier child that can provide blood or healthy bone marrow top help their sibling." I agree that the process of designer babies should be used to and certain extent. Not to change the color of of our babies hair, eyes, or skin, but to save our children from contracting a life long malfunction, or deformity.

Bethany's Paper:

1. The main point the author is trying to make is that we should brush our teeth to maintain healthy teeth. Her thesis was "Your tooth brush choice affects the overall health of your teeth.
2. The authors explains how the tooth brush you choose can actually be detrimental to your health. She then backs up this evidence by saying that many people use hard bristled tooth brushes, when in fact soft bristled tooth brushes are better. And then she backs up this claim by telling the readers that this was a fact confirmed by the Dental Care of Austin, making her reason plausible and efficient.
3. The writer also uses the same evidence as a counterargument saying that some may think that a harder bristled tooth brush is better, disagrees with this, and then utilizes the say of a Dentist named Caitlin Bachelor from Virginia. Caitlin says that brushing with a hard bristled tooth brush "bites, and chews away enamel." She doesn't slam on the other side of the argument by saying something like, "some idiots may think that using a hard bristled tooth brush is better, but i'm here to tell you that they are totally wrong." She instead acknowledges that people may think this but then respectfully explains why and how its not good for the health of your teeth.
4. The writer uses sources such as dentists, facts from books, and websites, all to back up claims and to support evidence she uses. All of these sources are credible because dentist know about teeth, the website was a government website. She did not say if any of the sources were current.
5. The writer draws us in with questions like, "what i you didn't have teeth?" We all instantly draw our attention to what she is saying because most of us enjoy having teeth. She uses the word you, and we quite often which makes an instant connection between what the writer is saying and the reader. I agree that the author and i share the same beliefs because i care a lot about the health of my teeth and its nice to know what I can do o improve the Health, and end bad habits of my own.

Argument Essay (rough draft)

Micah Nelson

English 101-5:30

Dr. Sonia Begert

3 December 2015

Cut Back A Little

Today as citizens of America, and stewards of the land we face many dilemmas. Health problems caused by air pollution, damage to precious land from coal mining, environmental deterioration due to global warming, water pollution, and even acid rain. All of these major complications could be avoided if we simply cut back on the amount of energy we use in our daily lives. In this essay I will discuss how and why we should cut back on our use of energy and how in doing so we won't only be improving our lives, but the lives of generations to come.

Cutting back on energy means many things. On the Natural Resources Defense Council website it states that “Our best weapon against global climate change is clean energy. Renewable power, conservation, energy efficiency in buildings and elsewhere, more efficient vehicles and clean fuels. These are the solutions that will reduce the impacts on our climate, revive our economy, and create jobs”(Quotation from NDRC website). By saving energy we are saving the earth, saving lives, and saving money.

Our earth is being greatly impacted by many factors. One of the biggest issues we face is climate change due to global warming. Climate change is caused by global warming. A large factor adding to global warming is our burning of fossil fuels. We burn fossil fuels for many different purposes but one of the most important outcomes we get is electricity. However in the U.S. our main way of creating electricity is burning fossil fuels in a coal, oil, or gas powered power station, turning water into steam, and then using the steam to power a big set of wheels called a steam turbine. “In 2014, the United States generated about 4,093 billion kilowatt hours of electricity.  About 67% of the electricity generated was from fossil fuels (coal, natural gas, and petroleum)”(Quote from U.S. Energy Information Administration website) CO2  and greenhouse gasses are released, making our atmosphere thicker, and in turn is heating the earth. Thus causing climate change. “Climate change is the greatest humanitarian crisis of our time, responsible for rising seas, raging storms, searing heat, ferocious fires, severe drought, and punishing floods. It threatens our health, communities, economy, and national security”(Quotation from NRDC website). While maybe having a hotter summer here in Washington where the sun only comes out every so often, is adding to our global climate change worth it?  All agricultural development and growth depends on a steady water supply, and with climate change we have seen more floods and droughts. Take California for example. Over the summer I spent some time in San Diego at my Grandmother's house. At this time California had been experiencing an extreme drought. My Grandma explained to me how nobody was even allowed to water their gardens, or fill their pools, and that residents of the area had been advised to cut back on their overall water usage. This was especially sad to see because my grandmas whole garden had died due to this drought. She had used this garden to grow many foods such as tomatoes, and carrots which were beneficial to her overall health, and also saved her overall expenses instead of going to the grocery store. On a larger scale we see in an article by Katharine Mieszkowski on July 23, 2014 that, “California farms, which guzzle 80 percent of the water used by humans in the state, are feeling the heat. Farmers in the dry Central Valley alone may stand to lose $810 million this year from keeping their fields idle, according to the UC Davis Center for Watershed Sciences. They’ll also spend an extra $453 million on pumping water out of the ground. The state likely will lose 17,100 agricultural jobs because of the drought”(Article on Reveal News Website). We clearly see how just cutting down and using renewable green sources of energy can save us from larger problems like the drought in California, which is only one of the many places being affected negatively by climate change.

In cutting back on our use of energy we can save lives, and make a healthier living environment for future generations. When we burn fossil fuels we release all sorts of chemicals, depending on what fossil fuel we are burning. The chemicals released range from things like lead which is released into the atmosphere when we buy unleaded gasoline, to things like sulfur dioxide that comes from the burning of coal and oil in power plants. Sulfur dioxide worsens symptoms of people who have asthma or emphysema. Sulfur also irritates people's eyes, noses, throats, and even has a negative effect on crops. If we simply cut back on our use of energy we could reduce some of the damage we are doing to the earth and ourselves. In the chapter 5 of the book “Power Hungry” by Robert Bryce,  fellow at the Institute for Energy Research, it talks about how coal fired power plants are some of the largest emitters of mercury “pumping some 96,000 pounds of mercury into the air each year.” He then goes on to explain how most humans come into contact with mercury when eating fish from bodies of water that have been exposed to the mercury, and how damaging it is to the human body. Mercury especially affects pregnant woman, and older folks, and has been linked to things like “autism, impaired cognition, and neurodegenerative disorders like alzheimer's.” Bryce also goes on to explain how on top of all of the mercury released by coal burning power plants, they also release about “176,000 pounds of lead, 161,000 pounds of chromium, and 100,000 pounds of arsenic- all of which are damaging to the human body”(section from chapter 5 of the book Power Hungry). As you can see the amount of coal, and other fossil fuels needed to sustain our energy wasting lifestyles has major health risks.

By cutting back on our use of energy, we are also reducing our bills, and who doesn't enjoy saving money? We as Americans waste so much electricity, through habits, and through things like leaving the lights on while we're away. Our hard earned money is being wasted, when we could set money aside to do things like a family vacation ,save money for  college, or even save up for that new car you've been wanting! The cost of energy used in our household varies from state to state, but according to latest release from the U.S. Department of Energy-Energy Information Administration (EIA), “the average residential monthly electric bill was $110.2”(section from eye on housing website). This is a lot of money to some who don't have much, and even to those who have the money, it's never a bad time to save.

Recently in my global citizenship class at Bainbridge Island High School we watched a video on energy, and the measures homes, schools, and even cities are taking to cut back on the cost of electricity. We first see an average couple, in an average house, in your average neighborhood. They wanted to cut back on their electricity cost, so they took the measures to do so. First they replaced their refrigerator, washer, and dryer with Energy Star approved appliances. Energy star is an U.S. environmental protection agency organization that works to help people, and businesses cut back on their costs of energy through energy efficiency. Even though the couple is buying these appliances now it's going to save them money in the long run. They then find leaks in their air ducts and seal them up to stop cold air from getting in and hot air from getting out. This makes it so they don't have to keep heat up their house as often or for as long when it's cold, and vice versa. The next electricity bill was substantially reduced, enough so that their house got a badge nailed on it informing people that their house is Energy Star approved. We then saw how schools in places like North carolina were cutting back on electricity costs by building schools that utilize daylighting, instead of lighting through electric light bulbs. Finally we saw how the city of Austin Texas replaced all of their traffic lights with LED lights, saving the city more than 200,000 dollars in energy cost. In fact Austin wasn't the only place who saved themselves hundreds of thousand of dollars by cutting back on electricity through this simple method, “By replacing outmoded light bulbs in street traffic lights with highly-efficient LED (light emitting diode) bulbs, U.S. cities report over 10.4 million in saving every year”(section from government energy efficient solutions website). This is substantial. One, because these cities now have more money to put towards things that benefit the community, and two because in cutting back on their use of electricity the less fossil fuels need burned in power plants to create it. These are just some of the many ways people, and places have cut back on their use of energy in order to save themselves money.

Cutting back on energy usage has many clear health, environmental, and social benefits. We may not see something as simple unplugging the tv to make a difference, and it won't. Not unless we all work together, and take baby steps towards creating a healthy living environment, not only for us but for generations to come. By cutting back on our use of energy we are doing much more than just saving ourselves some money, we are saving lives, saving the world.

 

Works Cited

"Average Monthly Electrical Bill by State – Updated Data." Eye On Housing. National Association of Home Builders, 12 Mar. 2015. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.

Bryce, Robert. "Chapter 5." Power Hungry: The Myths of "green" Energy and the Real Fuels of the Future. New York, NY: PublicAffairs, 2010. 58-59. Print.

"Electricity and Climate Change." Electricity and Climate Change. Power Scorecard, 2000. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.

"Energy." Efficiency, Alternative and Renewable Sources. Natural Resources Defense Council, 13 Nov. 2. Web. 1 Dec. 2015.

Letcher, Trevor M. Future Energy: Improved, Sustainable and Clean Options for Our Planet. London: Elsevier, 2008. Print.

"U.S. Energy Information Administration - EIA - Independent Statistics and Analysis." What Is U.S. Electricity Generation by Energy Source? U.S. Department of Energy, 31 Mar. 2015. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.

quotes with works cited

On the Natural Resources Defense Counsel website it states that “Our best weapon against global climate change is clean energy. Renewable power, conservation, energy efficiency in buildings and elsewhere, more efficient vehicles and clean fuels -- these are the solutions that will reduce the impacts on our climate, revive our economy, and create jobs”(Quotation from NDRC website).

http://www.nrdc.org/energy/default.asp

In a section on Power Scorecard it states that “There is increasing scientific evidence showing that human enterprises, especially burning fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas are altering the earth's climate”(quotation from powerscorecard website).

http://powerscorecard.org/issue_detail.cfm?issue_id=1

According to Trevor M Letcher, Professor of chemistry at the University KwaZulu-Natal, Durban and a Fellow of the Royal Society of Chemistry, “The present world energy supply is dominated by fossil fuel (Table 1.1), which unfortunately is not sustainable in the long term” (section 1.2).

http://www.amazon.com/Future-Energy-Improved-Sustainable-Options-ebook/dp/B00GR0IC0C/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1447987010&sr=1-1&keywords=saving+energy+and+our+climate

Works Cited

"Energy." Efficiency, Alternative and Renewable Sources.  Web. 19 Nov. 2015.

"Electricity and Climate Change." Electricity and Climate Change.  Web. 19 Nov. 2015.

Letcher, T. M. Future Energy: Improved, Sustainable and Clean Options for Our Planet.          Amsterdam, Netherlands: Elsevier, 2008. Print.

Developing Your Argument

1. We should cut down on energy usage.
2. My audience would is anybody who uses energy. Especially Americans because we need to start with ourselves first.
3. I'm going to appeal to peoples using pathos by explainable to them how we are making life bad for our next generations. This will get people to think about how the choices we make can affect our own children.
4. Im going to make my audience believe my by using facts and statistics based on energy consumption, and how its affecting us.
5. One reason we should cut down on our energy usage is because the more coal we burn and use, the more mountain tops we blow up. This leads to all sorts of geographical issues. Another reason to cut back on energy usage is because fossil fuels are finite.
6. A point someone on the opposing side of the argument could possibly make is that we need to be burning fossil fuels to transport foods that we eat.
7. I would answer them by saying we should support our local economy, and help farmers in our own community succeed by buying local food. 
8. Another point someone could make is that our demand for energy is constantly increasing, making it so we need to burn more fossil fuels.
9. I would say yes this is true but, if we cut back on things like heating, lighting, and did simple things like patches up holes in our air ducts we could be using way less energy.
10. The thing that makes this topic so worthy of acknowledgement is that not only would we be benefiting from it for the rest of our lifetime, but our children, and our children children would also be benefiting.
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Thinking About The Text: Spriggs/ On buying locals

1. Spriggs convinced me of the importance of buying local, and also establishes the importance of her topic by giving lots of detail, and facts from reliable sources on the benefits of buying local, and how it can help economies on a small and large scale.
2. One counter argument that Spriggs presents is that some may say we shouldn't be trying to grow food that is sustainable in that particular environment. She then goes to agree with that by explaining how we should just buy what we actually can grow.
3. One section of Spriggs essay that strikes me as powerful was when she responded to a claim that Alex Avery made. She then gives a solution, and explains even more ways why buying local is good.
4. The photos really added to my sense of understanding the issue by giving me a visual representation of exactly what shes talking about. Especially figure 1 where we see locally grown goods being sold for a cheap price of only 60 cents each.

Public Service Video: Two Sisters Tragic Story

Summary: A short informational film called "Two Sisters Tragic Story" informs people of the dangers of drinking and driving, by giving us a tragic story of girls that lost their life in a drinking and driving accident, further influencing them to form an organization devoted to giving safe rides homes to prevent an accident similar to this one from happening to anyone else.                                                                                                            

Analysis: This video uses strong emotional appeals when we see the parents emotions as they explain the car crash. The girl who survived the crash then goes to explain it from her own perspective also appealing to our emotional side when we see her begin to cry and use descriptions like "being crushes, seeing lights, and in shock." The video also appeals to our emotion side with the sad background music. We then see a logical appeal when they talk about how it common for people to say "oh she didn't seem that drunk." This makes us question our self and remember that if we are faced with a similar situation to realize that hey if the person has been drinking at all, then don't let them drive even if they don't seem drunk. At the end of the video they appeal to our ethical side by showing and informing us that they started an organization dedicated to giving safe rides home between the hours of 10:00pm and 2:00am. This appeals to us because it shows that they truly care about this incident enough to want to prevent it from occurring to anyone else. 

Position paper in class lab: How things mean

Album Covers:
They suggests that your face sells a product a certain way. The softer sexier feel of the woman suggests that her music is for other women who enjoy soft maybe even pop music. The men have strong and serious poses. This suggests their music shouldn't be taken lightly and that they are serious artists. The eyes work on the viewer to tell them what the music is about. The woman has a certain soft feel behind her eyes that the men don't have.

Peace sign buttons:
These buttons suggest world peace is more important than wars. They do this by saying "peace" and "make love not war". The elements that work are the peace sign because a lot of people are familiar with them and worlds like love and war because a lot of controversy surrounds them.

Different types of symbols and images in the media can suggest what the topic of the item or selling point is. The first way you can see this is on album covers. Images of people on the cover can change the whole selling point of the music. A picture of a woman, the singer, having soft eyes and a sexy feel can sell to both women and men. Women are attracted to the album because the feel of the music is softer and could contain pop undertones. Men on their albums tend to be seen as  strong and almost cold on the cover. The music in those albums are seen as serious and important where as on the woman's album it is light hearted and sexy. Another way to see different images and symbols suggesting the topic is on buttons. On two different buttons they suggest that peace is important in life. On the first button it is easy to understand because of the common peace sign and the word peace. The words flow on the button and help to suggest a calming feel to it. The second button suggests that love is more important than war. It uses the peace sign again to suggest peace is more important than war. These symbols work because the faces have a certain tone and the symbols are common and recognizable to the public.

argument summary

"Analyzing Arguments" tells us how to make proper arguments. It goes on by explaining how certain aspects of our argument can help us in making our argument. Even little things like "The clothes you choose to wear argue for your own sense of style"(pg. 275). It then goes on by informing us that in making an argument we need to realize who's arguing and where are they coming from, whats at stake, and what the claim is. We then learn to make a claim arguable it needs to be pertaining to something that people can have different perspectives on.