Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Taking stock on your writing


  1. I found that paraphrasing texts was the most helpful method i used in analyzing the ads.
  2. I first picked out 3 powerful images that would work well to support the claims I was making, then i analyzed each ad, and finished with a powerful conclusion,
  3. My written analysis was well organized and easy to read.
  4. I did provide using evidence from the ads and even a website.
  5. In my analysis I feel like I really proved how peoples view on the use of tobacco has changed over the years.
  6. I feel like my paper would be better if I had included more ads over the years instead of skipping so many years in between them.
  7. The visuals in the ad played a key role in my analysis because they made the ads more dramatic.
  8. Other people gave me grammatical error corrections which helped out a lot. Also some of my sentence structure didn't make sense and other people helped me correct that. 
  9. Next time I would definitely expand a little on my writing and add more detail.
  10. I was very pleased with my analysis because it taught me a lot about tobacco and what effects it can have on your body. I also learned many of the ways big tobacco companies use to persuade people into buying their products. Another thing i learned was just how differently we felt about tobacco 60 years ago.
  11. One skill I learned through this ad analysis is how to paraphrase which can be very helpful for when I analyse a text in the future. Another thing I realized in doing this analysis assignment was that I need to look into what, who and how ads are trying to appeal to their viewers when i'm viewing an ad.

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